Some advice for writing an introduction for an argument topic.
A successful introduction has two
main purposes. The first is to give a clear idea of what your essay will be
about. The second (in argument-style topics) is to present which side of the
issue you will take and/or indicate that you will give arguments on both sides.
The first sentence of your essay
should always describe the topic. It’s ok to copy from the question a little
bit, but make sure to use your own words and expressions.
Consider the following topic:
Creative
artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas, whether
in words, pictures, music or film, and should not be restricted by the
government. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
- The first sentence should restate the topic clearly. DO NOT assume that
you can skip this step. Obviously, the examiner knows what the topic is, but
you should still include this basic information so that your essay is clear and
cohesive.
All of the following sentences would
be excellent FIRST sentences for an essay on this topic:
Many people believe that creative artists such
as writers, musicians and filmmakers should be able to express themselves in
any way they see fit, while others may believe that some government restriction
is required.
There has been some debate in recent years
about whether creative artists should be given complete freedom to express
their ideas in pictures, music and film.
There is no doubt that creative artists such as
writers, musicians and filmmakers make valuable contributions to society.
However, there is some debate about the degree to which these individuals
should be limited by the government.
- After clearly stating the topic, you should then present a clear opinion
regarding which side you would like to take, whatever it may be. For instance:
It is my opinion that the work of creative
artists should not be limited in any significant way by the government.
I completely disagree with the assertion that
artists should have complete freedom to express themselves in any manner that
they choose. There are many instances when this behavior can be harmful to
children or wider society.
- If you plan to write an argument-led essay, (an essay which discusses
both sides) you can indicate this mixed view in your introduction. You might do
so as follows.
Although there are some circumstances in which
artists must be limited, I believe that for the most part, we should guarantee
all people’s freedom of expression.
In most instances, artists can feel free to
express themselves in any manner they choose. However, there must be
limitations.
- Remember! Even if you do not have strong opinions on a given topic, it’s
still a good idea to pick one side over the other to ensure the clarity of your
essay. If you feel absolutely neutral, you can still introduce your
essay with a sentence such as this:
I believe that both sides of this argument are
equally valid, and will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of each.
There are arguments to be made in favour of
each of these viewpoints.
- Next, close out your introduction paragraph with a sentence indicating
your main arguments. Try to avoid personal pronouns such as “I,” “You” or “Me”
by using the passive voice. Be careful not to sound too casual/conversational.
Do not use the verb “talk” or “speak about.” (You aren’t talking!) Some
examples might be:
The reasons for this argument will be presented
as follows.
The reasons for this viewpoint will be outlined
below.
Both sides of this argument will be detailed in
the following essay.
- A few things to avoid in your introduction paragraph:
·
Don’t include extremely detailed
information or personal stories. Use them as examples after you have already
stated your main points.
·
Be careful to accurately use the
phrases “In recent years,” “for many years,” and “nowadays” because they are
not always appropriate! Use these for technological issues or for issues
related to recent development. For instance, it’s not appropriate to say
“Nowadays, people are concerned about the best way to raise and educate
children.” This is a very old problem, not a recent one!
·
When you make comparisons, be sure
that they match each other. It is especially important to watch out for words
such as “problem,” “concern,” “issue,” and “debate.” Make sure you use them
accurately. Remember your parallel structures!
WARNING: Although the above advice is meant to guide you and help you to write introductions to a variety of topics, you should never stick too closely to a formula or try to use one sentence for every situation. Read your topic closely and stay flexible so that you can write the best possible essay.
Think about what introduction you'd write for each of the following common IELTS topics:
Some people believe that schools should focus
on teaching core subjects such as maths, science and language, while other
subjects such as art and music are less important and should be taught outside
of school. What is your opinion on this issue?
While many important works of art have
contributed to society in the past, the quality and relevance of artistic works
has been decreasing in recent history. To what extent do you agree or disagree
with this statement?
Technological advances have made sophisticated
design technology available to everyone. This decreases the importance of
artistic ability since anyone can use computers to create art. To what extent
do you agree or disagree with this statement?