Oh, no! It’s the dreaded Task 1 essay! On the IELTS Academic
exam, the Task 1 writing assignment will require you to write about a chart or
graph. You must write 150 words as quickly as possible.
The Task 1 essay can be scary because we are not always sure
where to begin. Usually, we are presented with something like this:
You
have 20 minutes to complete this task.
The
bar chart below gives information about the average weight of men in kilograms in
several different countries. Write a report summarising all the relevant
information and give specific examples to illustrate your points.
You
should write 150 words for this task.
Actually, this example is a little more simple than most
Task 1 Charts, but let’s start with an easy one!
So, where should we start???
Well, the best place to start is looking at the text of the
question and noting the most important points.
We know that this chart is telling us
“the
average weight of men in kilograms in several different countries”
So we know that our main goal is to COMPARE and CONTRAST the
weights of men in different countries.
Remember that you should ALWAYS write an introduction
sentence that gives general information about the chart. Luckily for us, we can
steal the introduction sentence from the text above the chart. It is absolutely
OK to copy the sentence with only slight changes. Therefore, our first sentence
should be:
This bar chart gives information about the average weight of men in kilograms in several
different countries.
Good, that was easy! Next, we need to make a GENERAL
STATEMENT about all the information that we see. Is there anything that we can
say about ALL the countries on the chart? It’s tricky when all the countries
are different, but we can say something like this:
We
can see from the graph that the average weight for men in each of the countries
listed ranged between 74 kilograms and 88 kilograms. Within this range,
however, there is some notable variation.
So ALL the men in ALL the countries had an average weight
between 74 kilograms and 88 kilograms. Fantastic! Now we can pick out the
notable features.
Whenever you are presented with a chart of any kind, you
should always look for notable features. These are the largest and smallest
numbers represented. In this case, which country has the highest weight and which
country has the lowest?
It’s easy to see that the U.S. has the highest average
weight for men, while Brazil has the lowest average weight for men. Let’s make a statement about that.
The
USA has the highest average weight for males.
That’s good, but we always need to support our notable
points with details. So here’s a better sentence:
The
USA has the highest average weight for males, with a figure of approximately 88
kilograms per man.
Let’s also mention Brazil!
On
the other hand, Brazil shows the lowest figure, with an average weight of about
74 kilograms for men.
Those are two notable points. Another notable point is that most
countries on the chart are close to 81 kilograms. The most common weight on the
chart is 82 kilograms.
Most
countries averages hover around 81 kilograms, with Australia, Canada, and
Germany all falling within this range. Australia and Canada show the same
average weight of 82 kilograms each.
Great! We’re almost done. Is there anything else that we can
notice about the chart? Is there any way to divide these countries into
categories? Australia, The USA and Canada are all English-speaking countries.
So, it’s possible to say:
Generally
speaking, English-speaking countries tend to have higher weight averages than
countries that do not speak English.
OK, I think that we covered all the most important
information. Maybe I should say…
I think perhaps
English-speaking countries have higher weight averages than other countries
because of unhealthy diets.
NO!!!
Do not give opinions or make assumptions when writing Task
1! Do not use personal pronouns such as "I" "You" or "We." You should absolutely stick only to the FACTS and write about the
information that you can see on the chart. Make a conclusion which expresses
your introduction again, but using slightly different words.
In
conclusion, although the average weight of men in the countries shown measured
from 74 kilograms to 88 kilograms, we can observe some significant fluctuation within
that range.
All Task 1 essays should follow this pattern:
- Introduction
- General Statement About the Whole Chart
- Mention a Notable Feature
- Give A Detail to Support Notable Feature
- Mention Another Notable Feature
- Give Another Detail to Support Notable Feature
- Conclusion
Your final essay should look something like this:
This bar chart gives information about the average weight of men in kilograms in several
different countries. We can see from the graph that the average weight for men
in each of the countries listed ranged between 74 kilograms and 88 kilograms. Within
this range, however, there is some notable variation. The USA has the highest
average weight for males, with a figure of approximately 88 kilograms per man. This
is significantly higher than other countries. On the other hand, Brazil shows
the lowest figure, with an average weight of about 74 kilograms for men. Most
countries averages hover around 81 kilograms, with Australia, Canada, and
Germany all falling within this range. Australia and Canada show the same
average weight of 82 kilograms each. Generally speaking, English-speaking
countries tend to have higher weight averages than countries that do not speak
English. In conclusion, although the average weight of men in the countries
shown measured from 74 kilograms to 88 kilograms, we can observe some
significant fluctuation within that range.
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